YEAH its youre birthday my dear <33333333 so happy bithday happy biirthdaay too you <333 and
Hnnngg i hope youre allright and not so stressed on youre birthday and i hope you enjoyed it well<33 I really love you youre ever a good friend to me and i hope you like my little gift<333 I decide to draw youre oc tiffanny<33333(cant draw boys otl <w< but i hope you fine whit it ;u;!)
to the picture.. i was trying to do a semi chibi but i dont like how it came out ;u;....
and as for the fact you don't like how it came out, the only thing that makes it look odd is the face here's a suggestion for a way to fix it: [link]
now that I have a visual example of what I mean, let me explain why it looks more balanced. firstly, she's facing with her face almost completely towards us, so her nose was too far to the left of her face based on how her body was positioned her mouth was in an wide upward smile which would normally show teeth, so looks more natural with teeth, and was too far down
aside from the face though, I adore how you drew her, and the elegant motion in the clothes and the hair, and it's so vibrant and nice ♥
sorry if you don't want critiques ; v ; /hit /hides